Thursday, October 7, 2010

Blackout and chaos

Blackout and chaos
• Without warning, the MRT train jerked to a halt and everything turned pitch dark. Panic invaded the carriage I was in. Some of the commuters screamed at the top of their voice and burst into tears. Fear ripped into my lungs, robbing me off all oxygen. I could hear my own pulses and my heart palpitating with the chilling fear that was setting in. The carriage was soon abuzz with nervous chatters and some lights from mobile phones illuminated the carriage.

• The train came into a sudden halt. The light in the carriage started flickering and the whole train was engulfed in darkness.

• The train was plunged into total darkness! The train was in total chaos and fear snaked around my heart as I adjust to the darkness.

29 comments:

  1. These phrases are so useful!Did a kid write this?Its good for essays on fear.

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  2. It is good...But if you can put more beautiful phrases,it will be better

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  3. Do you have any smoke phrases?

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    1. Smoke wafted through the train, causing me to cough and sputter.

      This might help you.

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  4. the first para graphs elaborate a lot!

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  5. Do you have any phrases about 2 mischievous boys smashing the glass of the fire alarm? It would be really helpful if you could post it. Thanks

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  6. This is just what I need.Thanks

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  7. The exact thing!thnkx!!!

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    1. ????What Nonsense is this?

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    2. WHAT NONSENSE? SHUT UP!

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    3. This author of the website is super awsome

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  9. This is really useful. thanks

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  10. The first para is the best

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  11. what I really needed!

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  12. Really useful. Thanks a lot!:) ^^

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  13. ^^ just what i needed for my composition! :D

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  14. Thanks,you have completed the start of my homework XD!!!

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  15. Thank you, it is very helpful but maybe you might want to post more then it will be great.

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  16. Good! It is very helpful!!

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  17. It might be of some help to my compo, but you may want to consider to post more of such helpful phrases and paragraphs!

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  18. My exams are tomorrow. Gosh! Any phrases by tomorrow morning before 5.30am?

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  19. i usually say this to most people ...add more action and beutiful phrases but to you i say one word,perfect

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