Thursday, October 7, 2010

Car Crash

Car Crash

• The young driver sped recklessly on the highway. The bus zipped past cars and lorries and was traveling at a speed on 120km/h with 20 passengers on board! Suddenly, the bus veered abruptly to the right and plunged into a ravine, crashing into a tree.

• The driver’s foot riled the accelerator and pushed the taxi to its limits precariously. All of a sudden, the car in front of them braked. The driver slammed his foot down, attempting to salvage the situation with an emergency brake.

• The tyres blazed the rough cement road as it screeched with a deafening sound. The car went free-wheeling and turned turtle before coming to as stop.

• A deafening blast rose into the air. The car had crashed into a tree. The windscreen shattered into smithereens. Thick layers of burnt dust puffed out of the rattling engine. Traffic came into an immediate total standstill.

47 comments:

  1. Stealing...haha no lah!!!thank you for giving me idea

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    1. can u write phrases abt cyclists accident ??

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    2. it is almost the same as car crash
      u just need to change a bit

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  2. Thanks a lot! This really helps!
    And by the way, Mr Victor Ng just made me remember the 'alot'...

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  3. Thank you NIGGA

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    1. ppl do a lot to help us so to improve so juz shaddap lah

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    2. Can i have s*x with you?

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    3. Please strip yourself now.

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    4. too little phrases...

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    5. ... omfg i used to think this site was appropriate for me........

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    6. ... omfg i used to think this site was appropriate for me........

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    7. omg same i think this is inappropriate now

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  4. My teacher asked for good phrases or words, and you helped - a lot, might I add. Thanks for everything. ;)

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  5. This is really helpful!!! :)

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  6. How do you know he travelled at 120km/h?

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    1. It's written in 3rd person POV unlimited, so imagine it's a movie, and you, the viewer, can see that the var is accelerating to 120km/h.

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  7. Helpful and ty website

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  8. Are we allowed to copy the good phrases? Because i am planning to join a composition the rules said i cannot copy without written permission or proper acknowledgment or else i will be disqualified.

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  9. Thank you for giving me ideas! :)

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  10. I need super duper complicated one

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  11. The young driver sped recklessly on the highway. The bus zipped past cars and lorries and was traveling at a speed on 120km/h with 20 passengers on board! Suddenly, the bus veered abruptly to the right and plunged into a ravine, crashing into a tree.

    • The driver’s foot riled the accelerator and pushed the taxi to its limits precariously. All of a sudden, the car in front of them braked. The driver slammed his foot down, attempting to salvage the situation with an emergency brake.

    • The tyres blazed the rough cement road as it screeched with a deafening sound. The car went free-wheeling and turned turtle before coming to as stop.

    • A deafening blast rose into the air. The car had crashed into a tree. The windscreen shattered into smithereens. Thick layers of burnt dust puffed out of the rattling engine. Traffic came into an immediate total standstill.

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    1. The young driver sped recklessly on the highway. The bus zipped past cars and lorries and was traveling at a speed on 120km/h with 20 passengers on board! Suddenly, the bus veered abruptly to the right and plunged into a ravine, crashing into a tree.

      • The driver’s foot riled the accelerator and pushed the taxi to its limits precariously. All of a sudden, the car in front of them braked. The driver slammed his foot down, attempting to salvage the situation with an emergency brake.

      • The tyres blazed the rough cement road as it screeched with a deafening sound. The car went free-wheeling and turned turtle before coming to as halt.

      • A deafening blast rose into the air. The car had crashed into a tree. The windscreen shattered into smithereens. Thick layers of burnt dust puffed out of the rattling engine. Traffic came into an immediate total standstil

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  12. He he thanks for the phrases. Now I can answer to my teacher with the perfect compo written =)

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  13. Thanks so much for this!
    Really helpful

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  14. my teacher already gave me these phrases…
    i need more

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  15. were you 11 when u wrote this????!!!

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  16. i love your descriptions!!

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  17. this ia good web for teachers and students

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