Thursday, October 7, 2010

Chasing after a snatch thief and robbery

Chase

• The thief grabbed my bag and dashed across the road, running like a mad horse on steroids. I immediately pelted towards the thief before pouncing on him and giving him my signature punch on his face that made him cry out in pain.

• The security guards gave chase like a group of Olympic athletes. In no time, they had caught up with the thief and handcuffed him.

• The snatch thief skedaddled away and disappeared round the corner. Upon seeing that, I immediately gave chase and scooted around the corner at the speed of the light. Soon, I narrowed the gap between the thief and me. Taking the opportunity, I sprinted towards him and threw myself on him.

Robbery

• Armed with rifles, the four masked robbers rushed into the bank and held up the staff members and the customers at gunpoint.

• “Don’t move!” the robber bellowed. Silence hung in the air as time stood still. All the customers and staff members raised their trembling hands and crouched in fear.

29 comments:

  1. hi do you have more of those cool pharses it's "so awesome"

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  2. Cool ... :) I am working on a compo right now ... And I have been stuck ever since then ... Not until I saw your blog ... Thanks!

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  3. That's cool..
    How can you draw an imaginative composition of that?

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  4. ya. i wonder how u can be so good at writing compos. i salute u.

    by manfred

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  5. THATS SO COOL OMG I LOVE IT SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLAND.

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  6. you are amazing
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    1. whAT THE ACTUAL BOOT

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    2. you suck
      not even impressed

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  7. this is great however can be improved if more action is added to it

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    1. I disagree. Too much action makes the story seem unbelievable... Plus, too much phrases make the story lame, boring, unattractive...

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  8. Not bad……………………………………….

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  9. this is so awesome.

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  10. Your phrases are excellent! You helped me a lot!

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  11. Thank you so much! i was stuck until i saw ur blog! ur a life saver!

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  12. Thank You so much but can you stop using * gave chase like a group of Olympic athletes? Anyway good job!Hope you'll do well for your exam.☺

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  13. limpeh clap for u

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