Thursday, October 7, 2010

Fire

Fire

• Fire spread itself throughout the whole building like locusts destroying everything in its path. Everywhere, people were taking off in all directions with fear visibly etched on their faces. The fire changed from orange to blue as the temperature rose like the thick black fumes that were stretching skywards.

• Pandemonium broke out, people dashed off in fear, hoping to escape from the clutches of the raging fire. The howling wind fed the raging flames and the fire sang a grim tune triumphantly as it burnt. The repugnant burning scent filled the air as the ravenous orange flames swallowed up the building.

• The orange clutches of fire wrapped its fiery fingers around the whole building, turning the whole building into a gloomy black. The roaring flame escalated ferociously when aided by the strong winds. The entire building was transformed into an incinerator with its strong flames, cremating everything into ashes.

• Everything and anything that can be burnt was fried in the fiery cauldron of yellow flames. Smoke and sparks were whirling in all direction. The sharp shrill of alarm reverberated through the whole building.

74 comments:

  1. your building in para 2 is spelt wrongly

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    1. This is great.i just made some edits.like fire can be blazing inferno.so hope it can be made to be more dramatic.but I love the creative phrases.like the clutches of the raging fire.n the wind feeding the fire.thats so creative

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    2. the spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correctthe spelling is correct

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    3. Seriously... Jensen. No spamming Jensen ( my Beijing room mate ) if u remember me... XD

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    4. Anyways Overwhelmed, good luck for your O' levels ;)

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    5. jensen pls do not spammmmmmm!!!!!!!!!

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    6. you guys suck

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    7. shut up,this is good

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    8. awesome phrases

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    9. This is a really good website guys..... Even teachers use it!

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    10. the spelling is correct

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    11. whatsup???????????????

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    12. this is good:)

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    13. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++qHahaha++

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    14. lol u are so lonely

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  2. Yay! U've helped me with my composition! Thnx. Do more on these....... Looking forward for good phrases on drowning!

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    1. its so awesome i totally rocked my compo with these words/sentences

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    2. totally awesome I got highest in my class

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    3. i completely shocked the teacher!!!!!!!

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    4. Goos phrases bro! Thanks a lot for taking the intiative to do this! :)

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    5. i no believe top in class

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    1. Yay! U've helped me with my composition! Thnx. Do more on these....... Looking forward for good phrases on drowning!

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  5. for para 4 i think Smoke and sparks were whirling in all directions

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  6. Thank you soooo much for this! XD

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  7. Thank z so much ! Easy for me to revise n take notes

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  8. Tks so much!! I wuld like to see more composition samples.

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  9. This is so AMAZING!! It helped me A LOT!! Thanks! ^_^

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  10. aweseme....
    pr1 lua kai kong

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  11. hello,it is so helpful

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  16. hey admin sup man

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  17. Thanks this realy helped

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  18. hey this really helped me a lot thanks!

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  19. Amazing phrases!

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  20. publish more so less

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  21. awesome, look forward to more

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  22. so little phrases... boh jiu lah... more!

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    1. stupid lah you why not the this ALL BY YOURSELF

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  23. Your phrases are so and they sure me a lot! you and please more phrases!

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  24. I love u overwhelmed....kiss u

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  25. WTS?! Next time write more phrases lah. ����������

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    1. PPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEE?!?!?!?!?! *puppy eyes*

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  26. Good luck for your O levels and thanks. I'm taking my final exam in primary school wish me luck too lol...

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  27. Very good. Well done.
    It's a fantastic composition.
    Cheers for good work.

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    1. I am a robot
      You are my robot friend too.
      Don't trick others

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  28. takin my psle in one month gonna die thank god u are here to help

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  29. Very vivid descriptions ! Good Effort!

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  30. The paras are very good! good job!

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  31. wonderful phrases and I appreciate all the good phrases you have come up with . I have used them in my compo . ( I am in primary4 for this year.)

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  32. thank you so much! god bless

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  33. Thanks for such wonderful phrases!!

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